About this lesson
Avoid the most common mistakes people make in writing a speech.
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Okay.
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It's time to get down the business.
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Time to roll up our sleeves.
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Slave over that computer screen,
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that keyboard then start writing the speech, right.
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Well, not so fast.
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And let me define the various audiences here I'm speaking to.
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If you were a president of a country, a prime minister,
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a minister of finance, and you have thousands of people examining
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every single letter coming out of your mouth and your written speech.
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Yes, by all means you need to write the speech, re-write it, have it vetted,
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have lawyers look at it.
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The written speech is incredibly important because journalists are going to be
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picking it apart.
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One wrong word can cause an international controversy problems.
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So, sure, there are times when you do have to write out a speech word for word.
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Now, let's talk about the other 99.999% of you.
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If you are a business person, an entrepreneur,
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even a CEO of a publicly traded company, if you are a student,
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a civic leader, a candidate for a local office or state office, guess what?
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Your biggest problem in life is not that you get one comma wrong.
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It's not that you left one word out.
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Your biggest problem in life when it comes to speaking is that nobody will remember
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anything you said because you were so boring and unmemorable.
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So, it's critical that you realize that challenge when you are quote,
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writing, unquote, your speech.
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Now, given that reality, here is what I recommend is the best policy for
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most people most of the time.
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Again, there are those exceptions.
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The solution is this, don't write out your speech.
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Instead, work purely from an outline.
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Narrow all your messages down to your top five.
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Give another word or two to give you the story's examples you need.
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If there is one really important number that you to stress, put that on.
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But when you're finished, you need to have your outline
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fit on a piece of paper about this big.
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It's gonna be easier for you that way.
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Guess who else it's easier for?
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That's right, your audience.
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Now I can hear some of you now saying, well, I'm TJ, I've got so
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much information, I'll never remember that.
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Well, guess what?
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If you can't remember it, and you've got a whole page of notes,
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how do you expect your audience to remember what it is you're talking about?
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Because most likely again,
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outside the classroom, nobody's writing down everything you say.
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If you see them writing a lot, maybe they're writing their grocery list.
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Or they're emailing their thoughts about last night's game.
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So you need to simplify.
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I've seen countless executives raised dozens sometimes hundreds of hours,
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their whole team of communicators writing and
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rewriting and rewriting and rewriting a speech, do they ever rehearse it?
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No, there was no time.
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Does the audience remember any of it?
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No, does it read okay if you are concentrating,
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it's quite in the room and you're reading it word for word?
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Maybe.
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But guess what, that's not a speech.
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That's now a book, a pamphlet, a Kindle E-book,
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a blog post, all of those things are perfectly fine.
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Those can be art forms in their own right.
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But that's not a speech.
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So, I am begging you, don't actually write out the speech.
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Use a simple outline, bullet points for
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your main messages, anything else you need to jog your memory,
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to remind you of the key stories, key examples, most important facts and
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numbers, and it should fit on a single page.
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That's really the most effective way to write a speech.
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